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Posts posted by fachryalsyarif
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Under review.
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Hello there @bernih08
Tolong perbaiki beberapa hal berikut:- Jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan seperti Bold, Italic, atau Underline.
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Hello there @vidhnzz
Tolong perbaiki beberapa hal berikut:- Pada penulisan harap gunakan ukuran font size: 14.
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Under review.
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Under review.
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Hello there @bloddyjack
Tolong perbaiki beberapa hal berikut:- Berikan jarak spasi sebanyak 5 kali di tiap awalan paragraph.
- Pada awalan paragraph gunakan huruf Kapital pada kalimat pertama.
- Perbaiki beberapa kata yang typo, seperti penulisan Bulan Agustus
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Under review.
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Hai, @starluxy
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
Happy Roleplay !
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@fachryalsyarif -
Hai, @kenycharlos
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
Happy Roleplay !
Administrator
@fachryalsyarif -
Hello again @kenycharlos
- Pengunaan tanda baca digunakan setelah kalimat dan diberikan satu spasi. (Contoh: Kata saya, dia B aja.) bukan seperti (Contoh: Kata saya , dia B aja .)
Silahkan diedit lagi.
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Hello again @kenycharlos
- Perbaiki lagi tanda baca titik maupun koma. Gunakan setelah kalimat lalu berikan satu spasi. (example: Nama saya ujang, Saya tinggal di injek.)
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Hello again @starluxy
- Masih ada penulisan yang seharusnya Kapital, tetapi kamu belum kapital.
- Masih ada beberapa kata yang penulisannya salah, yang seharusnya di spasi tetapi kamu tidak.
- ada beberapa kata yang typo.
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Hello there @starluxy
Tolong perbaiki beberapa hal berikut:- Dicek lagi dalam penulisan Kota/Negara/Nama Orang harus diawali dengan huruf Kapital.
- Perbaiki beberapa kata yang terdapat typonya.
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Under review.
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Hello there @kenycharlos
Tolong perbaiki beberapa hal berikut:- Perbaiki tanda baca titik maupun koma. Gunakan setelah kalimat lalu berikan satu spasi. (example: Nama saya ujang, Saya tinggal di injek.
- Berikan jarak spasi sebanyak 5 kali di tiap awalan paragraph.
- Penulisan nama orang diawali dengan huruf Kapital.
- Pada paragraph empat jangan berlebihan menggunakan tanda baca titik.
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Under review.
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Hai, @aayyooo
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
Happy Roleplay !
Administrator
@fachryalsyarif -
Hai, @mankbewoks
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
Happy Roleplay !
Administrator
@fachryalsyarif -
Under review.
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Hai, @kahfisy
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
Happy Roleplay !
Administrator
@fachryalsyarif -
Hello again @kahfisy
Masih ada beberapa salah penggunaan tanda baca, di edit lagi agar lebih terlihat rapih.
Charakter Story | Raymond Reshawn | 08-03-2022
in Approved Character Story
Posted
Hello there @xkiloswag420x
Tolong perbaiki beberapa hal berikut: