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Posts posted by toshiba45
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Hai, @healthcliff
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
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Hai, @bloddyjack
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
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Hello @healthcliff
CS-mu sudah baik tetapi ada yang kurang dalam jarak paragraph 1 dan paragraph yang lain terlalu jauh, silahkan diperbaiki dalam jangka waktu 1x24 jam. -
Hello @iwanswag01
CS mu belum mencukupi seperti kriteria yang sudah diberikan, silahkan diperbaiki dalam jangka waktu 1x24 yang telah ditentukan.- 1
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Hello @roar22
Silahkan dibaca kembali ketentuan-ketentuan membuat CS, diberi waktu 1x24 jam untuk memperbaiki CS. -
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Hai, @demit9
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, something went wrong at your CS. I decide to Denied your Character Story.Denied Reason :
- Tidak membaca ketentuan pembuatan CS yang baik dan benar.Please request your Character Story again later. Don't forget to read this Syarat dan Ketentuan
Happy Roleplay !
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Hai, @espinozagarcia
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
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Hai, @iyoojhak
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, something went wrong at your CS. I decide to Denied your Character Story.Denied Reason :
- Tidak memperbaiki CS yang telah diarahkan.Please request your Character Story again later. Don't forget to read this Syarat dan Ketentuan
Happy Roleplay !
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Hai, @sroxdon
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
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Hai, @keripiksingkongs
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
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Hello @keripiksingkongs
Silahkan perbaiki CS-mu, Berikan space pada awal paragraph dan Tanda baca yang baik dan benar. -
Hai, @azka07
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
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Hai, @archita123
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
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Hai, @1nonlyj
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
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Hai, @subnation
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, something went wrong at your CS. I decide to Denied your Character Story.Denied Reason :
- Kesalahan yang sama saat disebutkan, silahkan membuat CS baru.Please request your Character Story again later. Don't forget to read this Syarat dan Ketentuan
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Hello @archita123
Silahkan perbaiki CS-mu, jangan memberi jarak terlalu jauh antara paragraph satu dengan yang lain dan gunakan tanda baca yang baik dan benar. -
Hello @iyoojhak
Silahkan perbaiki kembali CS-mu, Paragraph antara paragrap lain terlalu jauh dan gunakan tanda baca yang baik dan benar -
Hello @azka07
Silahkan diedit kembali untuk bagian spasi antara paragraph jangan terlalu jauh seperti dia -
Hai, @trashpeople
After i reads your Character Story and Inspect your IC account, without something went wrong at all. I decide to Approved your Character Story. Please request on Our Discord to take your role Approve Character Story.
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Hello @sroxdon
Segera perbaiki CS-mu setiap paragraph hanya terlalu sedikit dan dibaca kembali ketentuannya. -
Character Story | Leone Carrera | 21-3-2022
in Approved Character Story
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Hello @syn0nym
CS-mu sudah lumayan baik, tetapi ada beberapa kekeliruan dalam ejaan dan tanda baca, silahkan dibaca kembali dan gunakan EYD yang baik dan benar.