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  1. Posted

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    Hai, @syn0nym
    After I read your Character Story and Checked your IC account there seems to be a problem, there are some Terms and Conditions that you are breaking, along with some mistakes that you are constantly ignoring. That's why I decided to     DENIED your character's story.


     

    Don't give up on what you did before, keep working and enthusiastic, and prove that you are worthy. Come back another time to submit your story, don't forget to read these S&K Character Stories and STORY OF CHARACTER KNOWLEDGE HOW TO MAKE GOOD.

    Happy Roleplay !

    Administrator
    @zein777

    • Like 1

  2. Posted

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    Hai, @bongkeng
    After I read your Character Story and Checked your IC account there seems to be a problem, there are some Terms and Conditions you violated, I decided to     Lowered the Clearance Level on your Character.
     

    Reason :

    Character Kill


    Don't give up on what you did before, keep working and enthusiastic, and prove that you are worthy. Don't forget to read these Terms and Conditions.

    Happy Roleplay !


    Administrator
    @zein777

    • Like 1

  4. Posted

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    Hai, @jaychanadrian
    After I read your Character Story and Checked your IC account there seems to be a problem, there are some Terms and Conditions that you are breaking, along with some mistakes that you are constantly ignoring. That's why I decided to     DENIED your character's story.


     

    Don't give up on what you did before, keep working and enthusiastic, and prove that you are worthy. Come back another time to submit your story, don't forget to read these S&K Character Stories and STORY OF CHARACTER KNOWLEDGE HOW TO MAKE GOOD.

    Happy Roleplay !

    Administrator
    @zein777

  5. Posted

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    Hai, @horizonoccasion
    After I read your Character Story and Checked your IC account there seems to be a problem, there are some Terms and Conditions that you are breaking, along with some mistakes that you are constantly ignoring. That's why I decided to     DENIED your character's story.


     

    Don't give up on what you did before, keep working and enthusiastic, and prove that you are worthy. Come back another time to submit your story, don't forget to read these S&K Character Stories and STORY OF CHARACTER KNOWLEDGE HOW TO MAKE GOOD.

    Happy Roleplay !

    Administrator
    @zein777

  6. Posted

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    Hai, @indrasastrawan
    After I read your Character Story and Checked your IC account there seems to be a problem, there are some Terms and Conditions that you are breaking, along with some mistakes that you are constantly ignoring. That's why I decided to     DENIED your character's story.


     

    Don't give up on what you did before, keep working and enthusiastic, and prove that you are worthy. Come back another time to submit your story, don't forget to read these S&K Character Stories and STORY OF CHARACTER KNOWLEDGE HOW TO MAKE GOOD.

    Happy Roleplay !

    Administrator
    @zein777

  9. Posted

    Hai, @syn0nym

    Dari Character Story yang sudah kamu buat, terdapat beberapa hal yang perlu diperbaiki & diperhatikan agar sesuai dengan Syarat dan Ketentuan Character Story yang sudah ditetapkan. Diantaranya :

    • Perhatikan lagi EYD disemua paragraf dan perhatikan lagi penggunaan tanda baca yang baik dan benar.
    • Baca S&K Character Stories dan Pengetahuan Character Story
    • "Teman-teman Yevdokia sangat menyukai Yevdokia karena Yevdokia tidak akan pernah menyenangkan orang di sekitarnya". Katanya teman-temanmu menyukaimu, tapi kenapa kelanjutannya kamu tidak akan pernah menyenangkan orang sekitarnya?
    • "Ketika Yevdokia sudah berada di tempat bisnisnya sudah di tempatkan orang lain lalu Yevdokia pun berniat untuk menjadi warga di sana dan menjadi pekerja truk terlebih dahulu." Modalnya kemana? ko tiba-tiba jadi pekerja Truck Sampah (City Maintenance)?
    • Sehabis tanda koma & titik di beri 1x spacebar. Sehabis tanda titik huruf kapital. Sehabis tanda koma tidak huruf kapital.
    • Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma), TIDAK menggunakan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline).
    • Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). (checker: Indonesian grammar / English grammar).

  11. Posted

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    Hai, @cemetery
    After I read your Character Story and Checked your IC account there seems to be a problem, there are some Terms and Conditions you violated, I decided to     Lowered the Clearance Level on your Character.

    Clearance Level :
    Clearance Level 1 ⊢ Clearance Level 0

    Reason :

    Character Kill


    Don't give up on what you did before, keep working and enthusiastic, and prove that you are worthy. Don't forget to read these Terms and Conditions.

    Happy Roleplay !


    Administrator
    @zein777

  12. Posted

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    Hai, @sanzadolf
    After I read your Character Story and Checked your IC account there seems to be a problem, there are some Terms and Conditions you violated, I decided to     Lowered the Clearance Level on your Character.

    Clearance Level :
    Clearance Level 3 ⊢ Clearance Level 0
     

    Reason :

    Character Kill


    Don't give up on what you did before, keep working and enthusiastic, and prove that you are worthy. Don't forget to read these Terms and Conditions.

    Happy Roleplay !


    Administrator
    @zein777

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  14. Posted

    Hai, @syn0nym

    Dari Character Story yang sudah kamu buat, terdapat beberapa hal yang perlu diperbaiki & diperhatikan agar sesuai dengan Syarat dan Ketentuan Character Story yang sudah ditetapkan. Diantaranya :

    • Perhatikan lagi EYD disemua paragraf dan perhatikan lagi penggunaan tanda baca yang baik dan benar.
    • Baca S&K Character Stories dan Pengetahuan Character Story
    • Sehabis tanda koma & titik di beri 1x spacebar. Sehabis tanda titik huruf kapital. Sehabis tanda koma tidak huruf kapital.
    • Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma), TIDAK menggunakan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline).
    • Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). (checker: Indonesian grammar / English grammar).

  15. Posted

    Hai, @gamemu

    Dari Character Story yang sudah kamu buat, terdapat beberapa hal yang perlu diperbaiki & diperhatikan agar sesuai dengan Syarat dan Ketentuan Character Story yang sudah ditetapkan. Diantaranya :

    • Perhatikan lagi EYD disemua paragraf dan perhatikan lagi penggunaan tanda baca yang baik dan benar.
    • Baca S&K Character Stories dan Pengetahuan Character Story
    • Sehabis tanda koma & titik di beri 1x spacebar. Sehabis tanda titik huruf kapital. Sehabis tanda koma tidak huruf kapital.
    • Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma), TIDAK menggunakan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline).
    • Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). (checker: Indonesian grammar / English grammar).
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  19. Posted

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    Hai, @syn0nym
    After I read your Character Story and Checked your IC account there seems to be a problem, there are some Terms and Conditions that you are breaking, along with some mistakes that you are constantly ignoring. That's why I decided to     DENIED your character's story


     

    Don't give up on what you did before, keep working and enthusiastic, and prove that you are worthy. Come back another time to submit your story, don't forget to read these S&K Character Stories and STORY OF CHARACTER KNOWLEDGE HOW TO MAKE GOOD.

    Happy Roleplay !

    Administrator
    @zein777

  23. Posted

    Hai, @syn0nym

    Dari Character Story yang sudah kamu buat, terdapat beberapa hal yang perlu diperbaiki & diperhatikan agar sesuai dengan Syarat dan Ketentuan Character Story yang sudah ditetapkan. Diantaranya :

    • Perhatikan lagi EYD disemua paragraf dan perhatikan lagi penggunaan tanda baca.
    • Baca syarat dan ketentuan CS (KLIK).
    • Sehabis tanda koma & titik di beri 1x space. Sehabis tanda titik huruf kapital. Sehabis tanda koma tidak huruf kapital.
    • Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). (checker: Indonesian grammar / English grammar).
    • Bila Cerita Karakter tetap sama, dan tidak ada perubahan dari revisi sebelumnya, maka akan di Denied secara sepihak.
    • Tolong baca kembali dengan teliti seluruh paragraf, dan perbaiki dalam jangka waktu 3x24jam.
      *Bila kamu di tolak, maka buat ulang thread baru dan koreksi kembali atas kesalahan apa yang kamu perbuat sebelumnya.
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